abcdefg wrote:
The reflections are amazing. I recognised them before I read the text. To me it gives the impression of a single shaft of light falling on gollum alone in his cave perfectly. Just like this (but better):
https://ollfilmclass.wikispaces.com/fil ... gollum.jpgFantastic painting!
Haha, thanks a lot! Well, that was kind of what I aimed for. I'm glad it worked out
Gandlaf the Grey wrote:
Some very nice and original ideas here. The water works very well and is a great alternative to water effect products which would have created a thicker layer. I presume it was regular PVA you used ?
I like the green slime very much, what have you used for this ?
The painting looks nice and he has a grubby appearance. What I would like to see from you is more work on smoothing out your painting, the back could be done a bit smoother as there is a little too much of a jump from shade to highlight. A few mid tones and some work on the blending would cure this.
The photograph is slightly dark but I like the way you are going.
All in all, another lovely piece from you and a few points to work on
As always thank you for your compliments and even more for the friendly criticism to show me, where to improve
The glue was 'all purpose glue', as I heard, that PVA might get cloudy after a while, which I wanted to avoid.
Actually it wasn't supposed to be green slime, but reflections from the water (or what do you mean?
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You are right, that I should work on the smoothness of some areas. It's a point I often only notice, when I edit the photos.. As for the back though, what you mean maybe are the scars and the spine, which I wanted to pop out a bit?
The darkness of the photo was actually intended, to give it a bit of a "cave atmosphere", I hope it's not over the top..